A FICTITIOUS STUDY ON HOW TO HAVE YOUR ISBS 200X PAPER ACCEPTED
Joseph Bio and Mary Mechanics*
Institute for Applied Sports , University of
Biomechanics, City, Country
* Mary's Institute, Mary's University, City, Country
The purpose of this study was to identify the causes of rejection of papers from conference proceedings and to present guidelines to limit the number of papers rejected from the Proceedings of the XVII International Symposium on Biomechanics in Sports. Scientists (n=95) with extensive experience in reviewing papers completed a survey. Each scientist selected their five most common reasons for rejecting papers. All scientists selected 'unsound experimental design? and 'lack of clarity? in one or more sections as common reasons for rejecting papers from proceedings. Other common reasons were poor identification of the problem (53), and poor analytical methods (65). Guidelines for authors arose from the study.KEY WORDS: research, presentation, survey.
INTRODUCTION: The International Society of
Biomechanics in Sports (ISBS) was established to disseminate useful and scientifically
sound information on the biomechanics of sports. The ISBS has recently called for papers
to be presented orally or as posters at the XVII International Symposium on Biomechanics
in Sports. To be eligible for publication in the Proceedings the papers must reflect
scientifically sound research with useful application to sport.
Thorough and Concise (1997) found that many conference papers were rejected because
authors did not provide sufficient information about their scientific methods. Thus, the
reviewers were unable to assess the scientific merit and soundness of those studies. Other
research has indicated that papers have been rejected due to lack of clarity (Structure,
Syntax, & Flow, 1994; Order, 1996). A survey of authors of rejected papers revealed a
need for guidelines to be given to authors prior to preparing their papers (Moore, &
Info, 1997). The purpose of this study was to identify causes of papers being rejected
from conference proceedings and to establish guidelines for authors in an attempt to
reduce the incidence of rejection of papers from the proceedings of future ISBS symposia.
METHOD: A survey was
administered to 95 reviewers of papers for proceedings of scientific conferences. All
reviewers had reviewed at least 10 conference papers exceeding 1000 words in length in the
last two years. The survey instrument comprised a single question asking each reviewer to
indicate the five most common reasons for rejecting papers. A list of choices was adapted
from the reviewers? checklist of the Australian Journal of Science and Medicine in Sport
(now the Journal of Science and Medicine in Sport). These items were:
1.Problem identification: Have the authors clearly stated the purpose of the
investigation?
2.Experimental design: Have the authors used a valid approach to the problem?
3.Analytical methods: Are the methods used in the design valid, reliable and clearly
described?
4.Presentation of results: Are the findings of this research clearly presented?
5.Discussion of results: Have the authors discussed their results clearly in the light of
previous research findings? Are their interpretations valid?
6.Conclusions: Are the conclusions clearly stated and justifiable?
7.Clarity of figures: Are the data clearly illustrated? Are the figures necessary?
8.Clarity of tables: Are the tables easily understood? Are they necessary?
9.Selection of references: Do the authors demonstrate a thorough understanding of previous
research on the topic? Has all pertinent literature been appropriately reviewed and
evaluated?
Reviewers involved in this study were permitted to list items not included in the above
list. They were also given the opportunity to make comments.
Analysis Methods: Frequencies of each response were determined by simple
addition. Responses by each reviewer carried equal weighting.
RESULTS: Frequencies of each response are shown in Table 1.
Table 1 Frequency of Responses
Item |
Frequency |
| 1. Problem identification | 53 |
| 2. Experimental design | 95 |
| 3. Analytical methods | 65 |
| 4. Presentation of results | 61 |
| 5. Discussion of results | 52 |
| 6. Conclusions | 45 |
| 7. Clarity of figures | 10 |
| 8. Clarity of tables | 23 |
| 9. Selection of references | 12 |
| 10. Other ? Lack of relevance to readership | 26 |
| 11. Other - Poor sentence structure | 23 |
| 12 Other ? Not making recommended changes | 10 |
All scientists included
'experimental design' as a common cause of rejection of papers. Although 'clarity' was not
a specific item, all respondents indicated that lack of clarity was a common factor by
underlining the word 'clearly' in at least one of the item descriptions or by written
comment. The results are summarized in Figure 1.
Figure 1: Sample Figure
DISCUSSION: The high response rates for 'experimental design',
'analytical methods', and 'identification of problem' indicated that reviewers were
concerned about the manner in which the studies were conducted. It is not possible to
interpret specific reasons for these concerns due to the limitations of the survey
instrument. However, it is apparent that the reasons would fall into two main categories.
First, the reviewers may have concluded that the reported design and analytical methods
were not adequate to address the problem identified by the authors. Second, the reviewers
may have had insufficient information to assess whether the methods used could address the
problem adequately. This may have been due to a lack of detail when describing the methods
or an inadequately defined problem or purpose of the study. Based on the findings of
Thorough and Concise (1997) it is common for authors to provide insufficient information.
Rejection of papers on the basis of poor design or analytical methods suggests that
authors should submit papers only for studies based on scientifically sound methods.
Authors should ensure that the methods are explained clearly and with enough detail to
convince readers of their scientific quality. Because the length of papers published in
proceedings is limited, information must be presented in the most concise manner possible.
This may be achieved by structuring sentences in such a way that the meaning is conveyed
with a minimum of words. Repetition should be avoided.
The finding that many papers were rejected due to a general lack of clarity in writing
supports the findings of Structure, Syntax, & Flow (1994) and Order (1996). Therefore,
authors should be very careful to present information in an order that promotes ease of
reading and understanding. This applies to the structure of the whole paper, paragraphs,
and sentences. In the case of paragraphs, it is often advisable to introduce the theme of
the paragraph in the first sentence, elaborate in the intermediate sentences, and
summarize the content or message of the paragraph in the final sentence. Authors whose
native language is not English have an especially difficult task. If possible they should
ask a colleague who has good English writing skills to proof read the work and ensure that
the meaning is still clear when translated into English.
The number of rejections due to a 'lack of relevance to the readership' was small relative
to the concerns of inadequate method and lack of clarity. This indicated that some authors
selected an inappropriate conference to present their work. Alternatively, the work was
relevant to the readership but the authors did not establish the relevance strongly
enough. The latter implies that authors need to state the purpose or problem clearly. The
'Introduction' section should be used to establish the importance of the study, how the
findings may be used, and how they might lead to further advancement of knowledge in the
area of research.
The main purpose of the symposia of the ISBS is to disseminate information on biomechanics
in sports. Therefore, papers should have relevance to sport. However, the range of topics
within that constraint is very broad. Papers may deal with topics such as sports
technique, acquisition of skill in sports, prevention of injury in sports, rehabilitation
of sports injury, modeling and simulation in sport, neuromuscular biomechanics, and
equipment design and testing. Papers may also deal with development of techniques and
methods of data collection and analysis that lead to further knowledge of sport and
advancement of the science of biomechanics in sports.
To ensure that the relevance of the paper is readily apparent to readers, authors should
explain the implications and applications of the findings. In the 'Discussion' and
'Conclusion' sections authors should indicate clearly how the findings could be applied.
This may include practical suggestions for coaches and players to improve performance,
reduce the risk of injury, or expedite recovery.
CONCLUSION: This study identified the most common causes of rejection of
papers from conference proceedings. Although there were many reasons why papers were
rejected, the most common were the use of unscientific methods or poor reporting of
methods and a general lack of clarity. Another cause of rejection was failure to establish
the relevance of the study. Some guidelines for improving the chances of acceptance were
discussed.
With regard to the symposia of the ISBS authors were strongly advised to explain the
implications and applications of their work for coaches and athletes or for advancement of
the science of biomechanics in sports. When preparing their papers authors should follow
the guidelines presented in this paper.
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Acknowledgment
The Scientific Committee of the International Symposium on Biomechanics in Sports would
like thank all those authors who follow the guidelines and format described in this paper.